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Journey of “Winter’s Rite”

by Scott Harper
(New Port Richey, FL, USA)

"Winter's Rite"

“Winter’s Rite” was self-published in 2005, but it took years to get it to that point. To go back to the beginning of the project, we have to step backward in time a decade.

In 1996 I began taking a writing course from the Institute of Children’s Literature. All I’d ever wanted to do was write. I’d written several short stories and the draft of a science fiction novel at that time, but had yet to have anything published. I began the writing course in the hopes of finally getting my work in print. The course was set up to be 4-years-long. I finished it in two. The final assignment was a two-part one. For the first part, I was required to outline an entire novel. The second part of the assignment was to turn in a draft of the first three chapters of that novel. So began my first serious effort at a novel, “Winter’s Rite”. I graduated from the Institute of Children’s Literature in 1998. My diploma hangs on the wall behind my desk. It’s side-by-side with my first acceptance letter.

After completing the writing course, I finished my first draft of “Winter’s Rite”. The book was then set aside in favor of short stories. Yet, from time to time, I’d pull “Winter’s Rite” back out and read through it. My talents as an author continued to grow. As such, each time I read my previous draft of “Winter’s Rite” I’d think, “I can do better than that!” and embark on a rewrite that would result in a better book.

The first draft of “Winter’s Rite” had been penned while I was living in Ohio. In 1998, just after completing the writing course, my parents moved to Florida. I moved with them in order to stay close to them geographically-speaking. We’ve always been a close family.

Eventually, I began to submit “Winter’s Rite” to various teen/young adult fantasy publishers. Several wrote back saying that, while they liked the project very much, it wasn’t right for them. Others never responded. Still others responded with the dreaded form letter. After a while, I stopped submitting the book and turned my attention once more to short stories. Yet “Winter’s Rite” refused to leave me alone. Haunted by this manuscript I seemed unable to rid myself of, I went back to work on it yet again. Doing so got me to thinking about the characters and wondering what happened to them after the end of the book. “Winter’s Rite” had always been envisioned as a stand-alone book. Yet, against my will, Book 2 of the series, “Well Wishes”, began to write itself. Was I to be stuck with the first two installments of a series of teen/young adult fantasy novels?

It was about then that an article ran in a local, twice-weekly newspaper about a writer’s critique group. They met Monday afternoons in the local library. I went to check out the group, sitting in on a meeting. The following week I returned with the first chapter of “Winter’s Rite” and read it for the group when it was my turn to read. I still remember the comment I uttered before I began to read the pages I had taken with me - “This is my first time. Please be gentle”. Everyone laughed. I read. They verbally torn the opening pages of “Winter’s Rite” apart! Over the course of the following week I rewrote the first chapter of the book, keeping in mind the comments and criticisms I’d gotten from other members of the group. The following Monday, I read the newly-revised version of the opening chapter of the book. And they loved it!

So it went. I was with that critique group for a little over two years. They heard every page of my first novel, “Winter’s Rite”, my second novel, “Well Wishes”, and the first few chapters of my third novel, “Gauntlet”, before I left the group. Besides those novels, I worked on some short stories during that time as well, always keeping in mind lessons I’d learned from the writer’s group. And, finally, in 2002, I had my first short story published!

Encouraged by the publication of my first short story, I once again began submitting “Winter’s Rite” to various publishers. It was rejected by all of them. However, there were more positive comments this time around. Yet it apparently wasn’t “just right” for any publisher I submitted it to.

Finally, in early 2005, I was working in a retail store in our local mall. I happened to have a chance meeting with another local author, someone who had grown tired of playing games with publishers and, as she put it, “being jerked around” by them. She’d self-published her first book, was having success with it and was near completion of her second novel when we met. We exchanged e-mail addresses. She began to give me tips and pointers and helped me to get “Winter’s Rite” into print using the same self-publisher she herself was using.

Not long after “Winter’s Rite” was released, a local bookstore got wind of it. I was invited in for my first book signing. The store bought two dozen copies of my book from the self-publisher to have on hand for the signing. And things have grown from there. I self-published “Well Wishes” in 2006 and “Gauntlet” in 2007 with that same self-publisher. Yet, of the three, “Winter’s Rite” is the one that catches the most attention. Promoting it, and my other work, on-line even caught the attention of a film director/producer in California who hired me to pen two direct-to-DVD films for his studio. That has led to me doing some other film work. It’s also caused my work to be noticed by other publishers. In eight days from the writing of this article, my fourth novel, “Predators or Prey?” will be released. And I didn’t self-publish it! I even have a comic book writer who would like to pen comic book adaptations of both “Winter’s Rite” and “Well Wishes”. I get e-mails from people worldwide who have seen “Winter’s Rite” somewhere, at some point, and write. Some have read it, others just write asking for advice on how to get their own work into print. Those who have written after reading “Winter’s Rite” have all responded to the book very positively. One went so far as to thank me for “not listening to what the mainstream publishers said” and “sharing this book with everyone”.

All in all, getting my first novel into print was a long, draining, time-consuming ordeal. But it was very worth it. “Winter’s Rite” has opened many doors for me already and continues to do so.

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Journey of “Winter’s Rite”

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Jul 07, 2008
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Thanks for writing back
by: Steve B.

Hey, Scott. Thanks for filling in the blanks on myspace. The numbers make sense. I guess I was just skeptical that "friends" buy what "friends" have to offer. (That and, for the life of me, I can't figure out how the site works!)

Regarding writers' groups, actually, I think no matter the group you'll determine that some of the people won't have feedback that's of worth to you. They may be decent writers, they may be decent critics, but they may not "get" what it is you're trying to do. (Maybe that's just my experience.)

The important thing, to my mind, is that if you're not getting ANY feedback that you respect out of the group, then either

1) You're fooling yourself, or
2) You're WAY ahead of those people.

I'd advise any writer, but beginning writers especially, to think long and hard before deciding #2 is the case!

I suspect you'd agree.

And here's what I take from what you wrote, and I suspect I agree: a successful writers' group tends to degenerate over time. It tends to both a) become too popular (attract too many newbies who don't really get the point), and b) lose the people who made it special in the first place. Those people improve, and they can pretty much predict what each person in the group is likely to say!

At that point, you've incorporated those other people's critical viewpoints into your own, and you're a better judge of your own work because of it!

Hey everyone: check out Scott's other post on the site!

Jul 07, 2008
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Thank you, Steve
by: Scott Harper

Steve,

Thank you for the comments. From what you said, it sounds as if at least one of the writer’s critique groups you were part of was a clone of the one I was with. We were a work group; we were there to learn, hone our skills and help each other. We made that amply clear to new members who joined. Yet, we were getting more and more people who were coming in just for free entertainment. They’d bring nothing with them to read and rarely, if ever, have anything useful to add when it was their time to do a critique. Beyond that, several of those who had been very good sources of information self-published work. Once that happened egos inflated and the group suffered even more. Due to these problems within the group, and the fact that I’d had my first two short stories published as the group was starting to fall apart, I left them. To date, I’ve not joined another. Maybe someday. But, yes, I agree wholeheartedly with what you said about authors being able to benefit from a writer’s critique group if they can find a good one. The one I was with was lucky enough to have a diverse group of people in it, including a semi-retired engineer, a nurse, a high school English teacher and a retired NYPD homicide detective.

You asked me about MySpace versus a traditional website. I started using MySpace for two reasons. First of all, it’s free. As a self-published author, I tend to latch onto any free advertising I can get hold of. Especially that which reaches a lot of people. Which brings me to the second reason I started to use MySpace - millions of other people use it. I have over 1,000 people on my friends list at MySpace. That list is comprised of an eclectic group ranging from other authors and screenwriters, producers, actors ( both mainstream and adult ) people who simply share other hobbies and interests I have, people I went to school with, etc. My thoughts are that the more friends lists I’m on, the more people are apt to find my page via those lists and, thereby, find my work. And, I also met my girlfriend on MySpace due to comment interests. I had no idea that was going to happen, but I’m glad it did!

People sometimes ask me why I have a good number of adult film actresses and models on my friends list at MySpace. The majority of those ladies are very, very intelligent and do a lot of reading. I’m an author. That alone make for a connection. A lot of them are also very pleasant to speak with. One, who, unfortunately is no longer on MySpace, was kind enough to place an ad banner for my own MySpace page on her MySpace page. She’d receive thousands of hits to her page each day and she did what she could to direct some of them to my work.

The self-publisher I used for my first three novels gives each of their authors an on-line store/blog. I use it, as well as another blog. But MySpace is the one that gets the traffic and helps to make my work so much more visible. And, as I said before, it’s free.

Scott

Jul 06, 2008
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Impressed by Your Openness to Growth
by: Steve B.

Scott, what a great story of your writer's journey (so far). Thank you for sharing it. It's hard not to notice that at every stage of your career you've been willing to learn and open to the possibility that you might not know it all! Sadly, many could learn from you.

I'm indebted forever to the various writers' groups I've been part of; they played an essential part in my own eventual success. I would consider anyone who has never been in a writers' group - yet is considering either publishing or self publishing - to hold off on your dreams of glory for awhile and go join a writers' group. It's that important.

Every writer should get intimately acquainted with his/her own writing weaknesses. A group is the perfect place to do this. And don't think that the only benefit of a group is in having your own work critiqued! There is just as much value to be had in critiquing the work of others. Those critiquing skills are what are going to enable you to be the best possible judge of your own work's merits (and demerits)!

You may find that you "grow out of" of a particular writers' group, or you may even discover after a time that you're done with them altogether. That's okay. Don't let it keep you from joining your first one.

It IS true that all the feedback you receive in your group will NOT be on the money. But by getting to know those other writers, their work and their critiquing tendencies, you'll soon learn whose opinions to value and whose simply to nod politely in response to.

A writers' group is not a place to come and here echoed back to you the kind of praise you're receiving from family and friends. If the feedback you receive in a group is causing you to feel defensive, then that is a sign that you NEED that group!

Now Scott, as someone who is

a) probably younger than most of us and seems to be experiencing some success in his marketing, and

b) someone who seems to be using myspace in lieu of a traditional website,

I wonder if you'd be willing to speak a little more to myspace and how you use it to your advantage! We old fogies could stand to learn a little something.

If you're so inclined, respond by commenting. Thanks!

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